Editing Door script (section)

==Scene 9==
EXT Ice Cream Place - Day

:''Audrey and Sebastian are sitting next to eachother eating ice cream. They're getting along. Audrey and Sebastian talk trash about other people's bikes.''

INT Audrey's Apartment - Night

:''I think maybe I should just delete this.''

:''Sebastian knocks on the door to Audrey's apartment. He's carrying a garment bag over his arm shoulder and his bike as well. Audrey opens the door. She's already in her pajamas.''

SEBASTIAN

How do you ride a bike in a suit?

AUDREY

What?

SEBASTIAN

I have work tomorrow. I need to wear a suit. How do I ride a bike 
in a suit?

AUDREY

You take the T.

SEBASTIAN

But I want my bike around. I don't want to have to take the bus.

:''Audrey sighs and shakes her head. She turns around and reenters the apartment, motioning for Sebastian to follow. She talks to herself''

AUDREY

I've created a monster.

Cut to

:''Sebastian is wearing his suit. His tie matches. Or is ugly. One or the other. It's not just “okay,” it's either great or awful.''

AUDREY

Roll up your pant legs. Both of them.

:''Sebastian does so.''

SEBASTIAN

Can I use those little reflective velcro thingies? They look 
cool. 

AUDREY

They're pretty good, but they don't always work. Rolling always 
works. Take off your the jacket. You'll want to carry that. 
They're really not suited for bike riding.

:''Sebastian takes off his coat.''

SEBASTIAN

Did you seriously just make a joke?

AUDREY

Not on purpose. Oh, and tuck your tie into your shirt. It'll flap 
around if you don't.

SEBASTIAN

But I'll look cool like that!

:''Audrey puts his helmet on his head. Once she's close enough, she tucks his tie into his shirt herself.''

AUDREY

The helmet makes you look cool enough.

SEBASTIAN

Am I Lance cool?

AUDREY

You're Lance cool.

:''Audrey and Sebastian stand there awkwardly, still just as close. I can write flowery text to express complex emotion here. Slightly before he moves, Audrey kisses him. It's rushed and sudden. I'm trying to think of an analogy to a film. I don't want it to be sweet and loving, but heavy and full of need. They sink to the ground, out of the image of the shot.  The two bikes--Audrey's and Sebastian's--are leaning near eachother. One bike leans more and falls into the other. Audrey or Sebastian--implications? I think Audrey would make more sense--just because she has a broken leg--reaches up and we see their hand grip the frame of the bike. Alternatively, we can not have this happen and have an awkward good bye.''